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Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Fresh... (Aakash)

Last night it didnt rain
there was a full moon
and no clouds to hide.

Last night it didnt pain
I knew you were there
in his arms held tight.

Last night, I yet again
thought of you, when you were
near, how everything felt right.

Last night, will but remain
the last night to miss you, and
that I'll never again kiss you
in tinted traces of twilight.

For this morning to my heart
will be a fresh new start...
just like another day.
Fresh.
blogged by AakASH!!! at 10/10/2007 12:10:00 PM
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15 comments:

  1. ishipishiOctober 10, 2007 at 12:35 PM

    b e a u t i f u l :)

    i luv it when there's that hint of optimism...

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  2. DarshikOctober 10, 2007 at 12:49 PM

    L U V E L E I H... (lovely)... ...


    waaah... tera kya kehna aakaash paaji... nice words ... uf... sach mei... ;)

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  3. AakASH!!!October 10, 2007 at 12:53 PM

    @ishi: Gaur se dekhogi, toh thoda forced optimism lagega. Jo ki woh hai bhi. :)

    @Darsh: thanks man!

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  4. KeshiOctober 10, 2007 at 12:53 PM

    **Last night, will but remain
    the last night to miss you, and
    that I'll never again kiss you


    Its a fresh day for ur heart as well as afresh pain right?

    beautiful post!

    Keshi.

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  5. ishipishiOctober 10, 2007 at 12:56 PM

    notice toh kiya tha aakash but then u see sumtimes when we try n condition our mind...it cld work out to our advantage...

    change doesn't happen..we gotta make it happen...that's the way I see it:)

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  6. JOctober 10, 2007 at 1:41 PM

    wah wah
    ekdam total waala pyar jhalking :D

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  7. SigOctober 10, 2007 at 2:10 PM

    Dard e dil hmmm??

    But the optimism at the end was a nice touch :)

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  8. VisheshOctober 10, 2007 at 3:06 PM

    fresh..but never fresh :) but fresh forever :)

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  9. AakASH!!!October 10, 2007 at 6:24 PM

    @Keshi: You get the prize for spotting. Have been so in love, have you???

    @Ishita: No Ishi, it really doesnt happen on will.

    @Jitendra: Total-total. :D

    @Silvara: Ekdam dard-e-dil. Jeena mushkil.

    @Vishesh: Sore as well. But it will take time for you to understand. :)

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  10. AmitLOctober 10, 2007 at 8:02 PM

    Hi,Aakash...that was a nice analogy of rain and pain.It almost left me asking'now,what about this morning-describe the fresh start,please'.Cheers.

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  11. My Unfinished LifeOctober 10, 2007 at 8:43 PM

    nice!!!and after such long time....yeah we try to force ourselves to be brave ...but...we never forget at times....

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  12. KeshiOctober 11, 2007 at 5:56 AM

    **You get the prize for spotting. Have been so in love, have you???


    oyeah :) I hv a mental museum of a past love. I thought I'd die from the pain of heartbreak...but I survived.

    Keshi.

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  13. Southpaw unpluggedOctober 11, 2007 at 7:53 AM

    Now thats wht i call fresh...:)

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  14. uttaraOctober 11, 2007 at 5:00 PM

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  15. uttaraOctober 11, 2007 at 5:01 PM

    aakash..
    so beautifully written ..

    :):):)

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