There I was sitting blue
Staring at the picture of you
Your hazel eyes made my heart sink
The blush creeping upto my cheeks turning me pink
I loved those words you said,
With a rose so very red
You've put me on a pedestal with a crown
Entangled with my locks of brown
This kind of love I have never seen
Its better than a view of lush grass blades of green
I love you more than a smushy marshmellow
You are my sun with rays of yellow
Your ways and talk always make me swoon and croon
Baby your love has left me marooned!
(very cheesy I know :P)
lol that was sweet and yeah a lil cheesy lol ... but u tried hard for it to rhyme din u? lol
ReplyDeleteI thought that was HOT Michi :)
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
that was really sweet :)
ReplyDeleteHi,Michelle..that was one nice n colorful rhyme.:) I especially smiled at the 'pedestal with a crown,entangled with my locks of brown'.
ReplyDeletewoah woah woah...
ReplyDeleteMichelleee...... this is very very shweete.....
has this hapnd in actual huh ;)
nice one hey :)
I love cheese! Dont you?
ReplyDeletecheesy,
ReplyDeleteahaha yes the point for it to be cheesy enough was for it to rhyme in a cheesy manner :P i was in a very cheesy mood too!
keshi,
thank you keshi :)
silvara,
thank yu :D
amit,
haha i was like wth rhymes with brown man...hehe finally thot f tht
darsh,
thank darshoo!! haha yeah its happened :P true life 'poem'
aakash,
if cheese cud be a person, id be cheese!! ok im getting very cheesy and lame now :P
ha ha.. yeah cheesy but very nice
ReplyDeletemichi baby...
ReplyDeletepinkkkk reminds me of uuuuuuuu :):):)